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Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Glamour Portraits

©2007-2009 ~AmeliaDolore
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Model, Photographer, and Stylist/MUA: Myself

YAY!!! i finally posted one of my self portraits!!! I recently used this in my portfolio for my IB exam.

If you could please give me some serious critiques I'd really appreciate it!

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and by the way... THIS IS UNDER MY COPYRIGHT SO KEEP YOUR PAWS OFF!!!

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~956Wulfe Apr 22, 2007, 9:05:07 AM
serious critique.. let's see, maybe you're trying to convey emptiness.. but otherwise, if you were trying to get a certain feeling expressed, I don't see much of it.. perhaps you concentrated too much due to doing everything yourself, a photographer has a slightly easier job as he/she captures your every move and then chooses what came out best..

anyway, I'm not trying to discourage you in any way, you just need to concentrate more on what you're feeling in that moment instead of trying to make everything look good

in any case, that's only my opinion, and you're stunning as always, great work

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PING-PONG IST KRIEG!!!
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~Rock-Republik
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~o0plur0o Apr 22, 2007, 9:05:15 AM
I like it.. but it seems to be over exposed dear.

thats the only gripe i can say..
lol
:heart:

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"A picture is the expression of an impression.
If the beautiful were not in us,
how would we ever recognize it?"-Ernst Haas
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~xeroticcur Apr 22, 2007, 9:45:32 AM
ooh, very nice.

here's my two cents: i love the idea, but it seems like you're going for the idea of being trapped? [correct me if i'm wrong] but the wires are a little messy, you know? maybe if you wrap them a little tighter [but don't choke yourself i nthe proccess xD] or just make it look like they're going somewhere, because it kind of looks like someone just tossed it on you...what would also be a nice effect is don't cover your eye[s] at all - a little bit of the wire did which is a tad distracting.

but overall, it's stunning. you're really beautiful. :]

[[and sorry if i was too harsh..didn't mean to be. >.<]]
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~mr-marchew Apr 22, 2007, 10:39:22 AM
really great concept. i pretty like it :)

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*lullacrie Apr 22, 2007, 5:14:42 PM
you are so gorgeous darling.!!!
fantastically executed xxx

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*ArcaneRaven Apr 22, 2007, 11:36:37 PM
looooooooks awsome! This style is excelent for desktop backgrounds. If you want to make a wallpaper or a print of it you might wanne try to use the space more. :) but thats my opinion and I'm not well known in the art of photography :)

PS: did you read the mail I sended?

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~dpressedpoet Apr 23, 2007, 8:56:41 AM
all I really want to know is how many times did you poke yourself in the eye with that shit before you got the picture you wanted :P?

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PS: This is what part of the alphabet would look like if we eliminated Q and R
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~AmeliaDolore Apr 23, 2007, 2:50:55 PM
none actually... haha, i just rock that much XD
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~dpressedpoet Apr 23, 2007, 4:06:41 PM
damn homie

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PS: This is what part of the alphabet would look like if we eliminated Q and R
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